Wednesday, July 29, 2009

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Driven to a corner by resident chimeras
Shivering underneath a self woven tapestry
Depicting grandiose deeds and epical conquests
The thinness of the fabric given rich texture
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Eddie Roa
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Inday Prising 30 July 2009

i love the last lines o this poem..really great imagery.,

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Catrina Heart 29 July 2009

Beyond the ersatz dazzle created by self conceit Conscience shakes us from our illusions and scatters The notions created by our futile attempts at greatness wow magical words made me spellbound! ! ! great imageries...well conceptualized

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Eddie Roa

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Manila. Philippines
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