I just love standing here in the rain,
In the middle of this quiet plain,
Thinking of nothing,
That's What I'm loving,
Hearing the thunder,
Seeing the lightning,
It's a great sound,
Then the rain starts to feels like pounds,
My shoulders start to sag,
problems come fast like plagues,
I hit them head on!
pretend there small little ponds,
now I'm here alone,
nobody to talk to, nobody to phone,
my heart ripped and torn,
How can I survive this major storm?
great rhymes here...fine diction...a fine ending with a query...well done! ! ! Thanks! ! !
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Great message. The storm gets stronger unexpectedly and the going gets tough. That's the test of courage. When the going gets tough, the Tough get going. Nice write. quite emotional.