Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 422,899 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

The Success Story - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

We are dreamy creature
Long for the things which is unsure
Why does then human being dream?
When they can't think of forming even a team

Each time we dream and remain quiet
Allow the spring to pass off and autumn to let
No one has changed their style except man
We are no exception but remain unchanged as human

Dreams are always beautiful
Sometimes provide key to be successful
We laugh it out and take no note
Meanwhile the water may seep in and sink the boat

Dreams need nice push
Credible effort without any rush
It may definitely pay in long run
As nothing is impossible under the Sun

Not all the kids survive after birth
Not all the pots come out safe even if nicely berthed
So think of some success after great struggle
It is yardstick for every thing to succeed little

It is always nice to think high
Couple it with dreamy planning slight
It may come off the ground well
Success story may thereafter definitely tell


Comments about The Success Story by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/26/2012 12:04:00 PM)


    Dreams are always beautiful
    Sometimes provide key to be successful
    We laugh it out and take no note
    Meanwhile the water may seep in and sink the boat
    - superb 10
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 9:04:00 AM)


    nice message

    Jean'd Amala26 minutes ago
    It was really enjoyable.Everybody should come over all hurdles.
    Comment +1
    I like it! !
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 9:03:00 AM)


    DeWayne Wright34 minutes ago
    Check mine out
    Comment +2
    Good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 9:03:00 AM)


    Barbara Cadogan20 minutes ago
    Nice reading.
    Comment 0
    Your insistence on rhyming
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 9:03:00 AM)


    Nat Lipstadt33 minutes ago
    Makes for awkward couplets, relax let the word come and don't force them
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 8:22:00 AM)


    We are dreamy creature
    Long for the things which is unsure
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 26, 2012



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