The Sun And The Night Sky Poem by Claude Davis III

The Sun And The Night Sky

Rating: 5.0


You are
To me,
As the sun is
To the night sky.

You control half my life.
And if you were gone,
I would be out twenty four/ seven.
And then I would have my life back.

But I wouldn't have it any other way.
For the half the day you are out,
You are out with me.
Even though people can't see me,
I still enjoy your company.

I only have late hours to myself.
But if I had a say in it,
I would change it to
Daytime all day.
That way you would be with me all day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 02 August 2006

Beautiful and telling, a poem of deep thought, I had to read it more than once and it seemed to improve by doing this Love duncan X

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