The Sun, The Star And The Sky Poem by Z doP

The Sun, The Star And The Sky

Rating: 5.0


I am looking at the sun
With your beauty I was stunned
And I know I cannot run
Because love has already begun

I am looking at the star
Just like you who's from afar
And gave my heart's a scar
And a tears that can fill the jar

I am looking at the sky
And everytime I try
'Do you care if I cry? '
'Will you cry if I die? '

Thursday, May 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,sky,star,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 18 May 2018

Dear Josephene, such a splendid write....10++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 May 2018

I cannot run Because love has already begun tears that can fill the jar Will you cry if I die? ..love is a real mystery. it is the greatest of all mysteries that is why we say God is love. you have a poetic mind and you fill your poems with great emotions and feelings.. thank u dear poetess. tony

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