Wednesday, April 16, 2008

The Sundail's Mechanism Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun sets gently in the backyard of suburbia,
The pools glisten like diamonds scattered in the grass;
These mortgaged heirlooms smelling of chlorine
And the children’s inflated laughter;
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Michael Campbell 16 April 2008

i loved the narration. excellent metaphors. very enjoyable to read.

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Robert Rorabeck

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