Saturday, April 13, 2019

The Tale Of A Stream Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a place not far from here,
Where the skylark sings its song,
And a stream flows down from a nearby spring,
And murmurs as it wanders along.
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Oisin Silverhare
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 April 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Oisin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 13 April 2019

A fine and lofty verse, well articulated and elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. An insightful creation nicely penned in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Lovely indeed. Thanks for sharing, Oisin. Remain enriched.

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Oisín Silverhare 14 April 2019

Thank you for your comments. They are very much appreciated. This is only the second poem I have ever written so it is good to know that it is better than I thought.

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