The Town Poem by Tony Adah

The Town

Rating: 4.8


The town is hot and scorch
and stinks of drains and waste
The tall gothic buildings gaze at the sky
their paint dull with flakes
Superhighways wind above and beneath
And cars pass in dizzying speed
The trees of grounds and garden lowly stand
and their leaves wearing a powder of carbon stain
The town is hot and scorch
from the noxious fumes of the humming factories
And the town is full of ailments
Alien to the countryside for the townsfolk
Devour what the machines have already eaten
And give them chaffs and wastes
That burden the system down.
The town is hot and scorch
And humid from the teeming numbers
It pretends to hold with little or nothing
To offer the crammed youths leaving the sweet
bounds of the countryside.
The town is hot and scorch
It stinks of idle youths and booze and crimes
And promises of welfare are fake and dashed
It stinks of drains and fumes and files of automobiles
And of promises unfulfilled
Still the town officials reel out rules
That make the common people fat cows
To the town officials' fat stomachs
And year in and year out
The town is embroiled in rigged elections
And corruption and every dream
Of the townspeople broken upon their heads.

Saturday, September 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R B Seals 10 October 2015

A vivid portrait of a town (city) writhing in the wake its existence and its people who are sorely in need to overcome or be consumed by its depravity. Your superb use of wording and phrase structure is most noteworthy. Indeed, an excellent poetic depiction truly worthy of praise (and a 10 rating) .

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 26 September 2015

Verily, the towns have lost the essence of purity

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