Shivapriya Surve


The Train Of Thoughts - Poem by Shivapriya Surve

Wishes fall lame…
Lamington pastries pester the mind,
Mindless grows the present
The present is devoid of any surprise, It’s plain, with no mysteries
Mysteries are all ‘my histories’ stacked together,
Together we march towards death,
Death is a sweet zilch, which beats the grind!


Comments about The Train Of Thoughts by Shivapriya Surve

  • Abha Sharma (3/25/2008 8:39:00 AM)

    Mindless grows the present
    The present is devoid of any surprise...........
    the little poem itself is a suprise when how gradually it introduces DEATH....good job
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  • rajagopal haranrajagopal haran (11/12/2007 1:39:00 AM)

    fine poem Shivapriya; the train would have more flavour if there is a death wish appended; nice to read (Report)Reply

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  • Babasaheb Salve (12/23/2006 12:07:00 AM)

    really so nice and beautiful poem (Report)Reply

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  • Asma Bahrainwala (11/18/2006 5:49:00 AM)

    interestingly interconnected thoughts...

    nice write...

    Asma...
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  • Lungelo Mbatha (11/16/2006 4:08:00 AM)

    well thought, well laid, i like how the lines inter-link...please give us more! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 16, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 20, 2010


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