Wednesday, August 29, 2012

The Truth About Aging Comments

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Boy looks six, Girl looks four,

I was once six, I was once four,
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Philo Yan
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Philo Yan 31 August 2012

I sometimes feel that I was born in the wrong era. Not about the advancement in technologies or communications but the high crime rates. The world is now not safe anymore. We use to have honest and trusting people in our days. Our parents and we could be the last generation who belong to this group. Thank you Rajendran for sharing.

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Rajendran Muthiah 31 August 2012

We can't escape the Aging Law. But with the arrival of internets, ipod, iphone etc make us to feel why we were born earlier. Very good theme for this poem. With simple words, in simple style, you present your ideas elegantly in simple poems.

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