Saturday, April 8, 2023

The Tunnel Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stroll down this road
That l have traversed so many times
And in various ways
At different points in my life
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John Paul Butler
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Bri Edwards 26 April 2023

You are comparing bare 'trees' to 'the rib cage'? This is a dream? HMM? bri : )

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Bri Edwards 26 April 2023

'a shroud of flesh'? ONE DEFINITION OF 'SHROAD': 'Something that conceals, protects, or screens.' I used to have one, BEFORE the circumcision.

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a "claustrophobic" road.! ? ! Good poem… The enigma strikes, stinks…

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