The Tunnel Poem by John Paul Butler

The Tunnel

Rating: 5.0


I stroll down this road
That l have traversed so many times
And in various ways
At different points in my life
Today it's claustrophobic
Enclosed like a tunnel
The misty trees either side hang over
Low as a shroud of flesh

But on meandering its length
My mind wanders
Musing on days when the trees are bare
A sky wide open
And l'm at the heart of the rib cage
Like an animal trapped
After death
And yet so ecstatic there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 26 April 2023

You are comparing bare 'trees' to 'the rib cage'? This is a dream? HMM? bri : )

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Bri Edwards 26 April 2023

'a shroud of flesh'? ONE DEFINITION OF 'SHROAD': 'Something that conceals, protects, or screens.' I used to have one, BEFORE the circumcision.

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a "claustrophobic" road.! ? ! Good poem… The enigma strikes, stinks…

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