Friday, December 22, 2006

The Two Of Us Comments

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I feel you, you know, though we never touch
I feel much pain from you
I want to take your pain
And go to the beach together, late at night, just this once
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jennifer killian
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Marvin Brato 14 February 2007

You are very good in telling love-strucked events in poetry Jennifer. You are able to awaken the sentiments of a woman who loves despite all odds.Great write. Regards

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