The Ugly Reed Poem by jyoti saxena

The Ugly Reed

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Wild reed I grew along the only banks I knew
A peter pan came and plucked the ugliest of those that grew.
The reed wondered what better fate could it meet
than to lie unidentified at the maker’s feet?
Peter pan oblivious of the reed’s confusion
Scraped away its rough bark with utter precision
the reed mocked at his ludicrous selection
unable to decipher his course of action;
not trusting the warmth that through his hands percolated
Pusillanimously defied the love that he exuded.
He removed the grimy visages that entangled it so
and hollowed out its bowels which had made it feel so low;
he closed his petal eyelids and blew his sweetest breath -
the music flowed unparalleled through the length and breadth!
mystified at the magic that it could possess
the ugly reed into the lyrical flute he had processed!
We have all been sent with a purpose by God-
just need a friend who can help peal off that pod.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 08 April 2009

Jyoti, I dont know how many times I read this poem. I feel like reading again and again. My gut feeling is that, reading this poem gives the same 'Punya' we get reading a hymn on Lord Krishna. You are no less. You could make scattered letters into a a bouquette of verses

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Egi David Perdana 27 August 2008

oh..so much, this a real poem

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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 August 2008

This is just great! ! With ultimate love we can become His flute. I remeber a story.Once Meera went to Brindavan and wanted to enter an Ashram where women were prohibited. She asked'Is there another man in Brindavan, other than Lord Krishna...' Except Krishna all others in the universe are Gopikas. Your poems have given the taste of great divine hights. Thank u very much.

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