Wednesday, August 12, 2009

The Untold Story Comments

Rating: ★3.0

You once told me your race
(Not if I really cared)
You once showed me the true color of your face
(Not if that mattered)
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Ravi Sathasivam 23 August 2009

Simple and nice poem with good rhyme. Well penned Enjoyed reading it Thanks

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Ramesh T A 20 August 2009

It is really an untold story jam packed with so many things! Nice!

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Tom Golding 19 August 2009

Great rhyme scheme and story teling without being forceful.

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Emily Core 18 August 2009

that was good i as well like the rhyme

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Sandhya S N 14 August 2009

the rhyming rhythm is the poem is superb last lines are the feast of the poem. regards sandhya

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~*Nezra*~ Farrell 12 August 2009

I favor your rhyme scheme in this poem its witty and loevly.

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