The Village Poem by Jabulani Mzinyathi

The Village

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the village torn apart
incessant quarrels everywhere
the village head drunk
his wife picking quarrels

the village head demented
his court now child's play
the village in shreds
advisors now high on kachasu

his children pissing in wells
flummoxed villagers painfully watch
the village head wields a whip
against those daring to protest

the village on precipice edge
the villagers' huts torched
the granaries not spared either
tottering on the brink of death

Thursday, September 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
kachasu is a highly toxic alcoholic and illicit brew brewed and sold illegally in some parts of zimbabwe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tinashe Mupedzapasi 04 October 2017

I did get this poem correctly, I am sure, and I really like it. Please my poem MY KING IS SICK AND OLD Its quite similar to yours.

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Jabulani Mzinyathi 04 October 2017

you would not have missed that. we share the same back ground and writing is usually organic

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Gajanan Mishra 14 September 2017

tottering on the brink of death- life

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Jabulani Mzinyathi 04 October 2017

such is the situation in my homeland

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