Thursday, July 2, 2015
The Vital Force Comments
Rating: ★4.5
In the early dawn I am awoke
With a slight laziness in my mind
But you comes and blesses me
with an inspiration to start with
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Ahmad Husain
02 July 2015
Well, sir, the poem is a masterwork, but still there's a minute grammatical mistake in the third line. It is written that 'You comes and blesses me'. I think it should be 'You come and bless me'.
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12/6/2025 4:05:56 PM # 1.0.0
A great write. Truly admiring.Loved reading this lovely poem.