Monday, August 8, 2011

The Wait Comments

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How is my love when she's alone?
Miles apart and doesn't phone.
Where is the justice that lets us pine?
Is the pain hers and also mine?
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Charles McMullen
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Ramesh Rai 18 October 2013

Excellent beautiful.loved the read

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Bri Edwards 12 October 2013

Which time nor distance cannot measure. ....nor...cannot? how about can? how about which neither time nor distance can(cannot?) measure i liked One from t'others counterpart. and the use of commas in When will our meeting, time, allow? where can i get that kind of love? well, i may have it now, with fourth wife! but why can't we avoid the pain sometimes? ? but it doesn't conquer all, does it? tack another L onto the doctor's name; we just saw the movie musical at home courtesy of the local library. thanks for sharing. i give it 'very good'.

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Charles Mcmullen 21 September 2013

Reads like Keats and Shelley.

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