Tuesday, August 2, 2016

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Rating: 5.0

Impenetrable,
Impervious,
The apotheosis of tenacity!
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Muhammad Ehtesham
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Akhtar Jawad 26 August 2016

Social injustice has always been a leviathen within the humans. Anyone who gained power became mighty and suppressed the weaker. The fact remains that the beast within humans could not be socialized as an ideal human. The actual irony starts when we claim that our misdeeds were in the interests of humans and we blame others for the same type of misdeeds. But the positive thing is this that we at least now talk of human rights. I congratulate you that you converted such talks in a wonderful poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 06 August 2016

I agree with Kelly. It's a powerful ink. Skillful use of vocabulary. Strong emotions expressed with flair.

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Kelly Kurt 02 August 2016

A powerful and well written piece, Muhammad. Thanks for sharing

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