Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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The War Mongers

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“If blood is tested by tiger” the legend says
It will become deadly hunter
Attack human being live stocks
It will become matter of game joke

Same way if person has tested woman
It shall be unbearable situation
He will go out for lust and try
The woman then becomes simple toy

In both the cases it is proven formula
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Thursday, April 17, 2014
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:) Aspen-Skye Lee17 minutes ago This is pretty good. Took me personally to understand what it was about -forgot to read title- then I figured it out through the poem. ^_^ Comment +1

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No flow Clint Miller18 minutes ago Too many grammatical errors and there is no flow. The analogies are ok. Give it some structure.

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Lisa Lombardi likes this. Lisa Lombardi Let us not become habitual The bad habits sometimes remain not casual They surface with strong urge It will be then difficult to purge... Nice! ! ! 4 mins · Unlike · 1

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Gajanan Mishra 17 April 2014

good writing sir, I like it. Let us not become habitual, thanks.

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“If blood is tested by tiger” the legend says It will become deadly hunter

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You seem like a wise person. Someone who has experienced both sides of many cases. I like this. 9 hours ago by lydia molinaro to The war mongers

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welcome stuti nayak 19 secs · Unlike · 1

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Hasmukh Mehta welcome Maricela Ramírez, Shujat Ahmad 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Brilliant! Paul Woodward15 minutes ago I absolutely love this. Says so much and I love the word arrangement! Comment +1

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