Monday, August 21, 2017

The War Zone Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I die in a war zone,
Box me up and send me home.

Put my medals on my chest,
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Shakti Jaiswal
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Beach Girl 22 August 2017

A painful reminder of how our choices, no matter how brave and worthy can hurt the ones we love. Very heartfelt and flowing poem.

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Chinedu Dike 21 August 2017

Brave utterances set aside for honest contemplation. Beautiful piece of poetry embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very insightful. Thanks for sharing Shakti.

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Shakti Jaiswal 21 August 2017

Wow

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