Sunday, December 28, 2008

The Warning Comments

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As I lie in my bed, trying to sleep,
I wrestle with a secret I am struggling to keep.
The massacre on the news, I am sure you’ve all heard
The police are searching all over, who done it, no word.
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William Helton
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XOR 9 28 December 2008

' As I lie in my bed, trying to sleep, I wrestle with a secret I am struggling to keep.' < - brilliantly thought..your poems are very black metal in nature build on a solid base of morbidness. I wrote a poem called 'Deathcraft'...it kinda matches with the soul of your poems... welcome aboard william!

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Aiswarya. T.anish 28 December 2008

Good poem. I like it. Write more.

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