lou parks

Rookie - 123 Points (02/27/97 / rocky mountain house)

The 'weak' Prey - Poem by lou parks

You see the girl with low confidence; you go to boost her confidence by taking her virginity by force.

You see the girl with big boobs who tries to hide them; you try to make her proud to have big boobs by molesting her.

You see the girl who starves herself to look pretty: you get her to eat by feeding her lies.

You see the girl with the scares; you give her cream that makes the scars disappear, making her crave them again.

You see the girl who is always alone; you bring your friends with you this time, trying to make her feel normal by teasing her 'gently'

You notice a girl is being suicidal; you give her different ideas of what to do but still hinting she should kill herself publicly

Topic(s) of this poem: rape, self harm, suicide

Form: Free Verse


Comments about The 'weak' Prey by lou parks

  • Jazib Kamalvi (8/8/2017 10:53:00 PM)


    A good attempt in the chapter. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 8, 2017


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