The White Wall Poem by austin ohc

The White Wall

Rating: 5.0


No scars the white wall bore.
Too flatly white, flawless it seemed.
Drawn to it, he approached closer.
Entranced but jealous, filled with evil,
Wanting to ruin its pureness,
He stretched his unclean hands.
Soon stained and smeared with the dirt
the wall appeared dark, no more white
but spotted. The cursed wall turned black.
Why painted white in the beginning?
The color white, vulnerable to deception, was a disguised blessing.
The painter gifted the wall with the white, knowing its future.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 30 October 2011

It's wonderful poem, , , elegant write, , , Great thought! ! ! Top marks 10+++

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Romeo Della Valle 30 October 2011

Powerful and amazing! This well penned and thought provoking write has become your stepping stone in the Poetry World, since it clearly shows your great poetic talent! 10+++ Keep it up! This is first but not your last! I am sure! Keep inspiring the World with more talented writes like this one! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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