Sunday, February 10, 2008

The Wolf Comments

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There is a wolf
That lives in my head.
I feel him pacing while I’m in bed.
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Frederick Francis
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Mary Gordley 11 February 2008

Frederick, I think it is a very interesting poem. I see the wolf as an allegory for that part of you which could, if you did not restrain it, act on animal instinct. Well written, save perhaps that in the first line of the fifth stanza you may have meant to say stalks instead of 'stocks. Thanks for posting this.'

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