The World Poem by Laura arwen

The World



The world isn't
perfect cause the
world is many
countries
Today the world
wants to be
a powerful man
but down down
it is lacerated
by the almighty
Yesterday the world
was beautiful and
it resolved many
problems and it
tolerated the drug
Now the world
has got a
lot of violence but
the world doesn't
know it
The world has
got many paradises
but they are
artificial
For me the
world is a
natural environment
Ireland is the
world
Sometimes the world
reasons on need
but the need
isn't real
The world is
crowded of poors,
wars and millionaires
The world is
pure if we
are real and
consciousness but nobody
knows it
In the world
there are many
problems and many
victims
In the world
there is the
hatred
Maybe the world
is a powerful
pride
The world is
a slow agony
but it doesn't
want to listen
it
The world has
got a lot
of anger

Thursday, March 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 16 March 2017

The word W-0-R-L-D has really too many meanings to be meaningful. Your poem proves this but you don't give up. Instead you press on, listing more and more dimensions of this word. I'm 100% behind your effort to make the word as truthful as you can: some of these are scary truths but still must be acknowledged. Others are close to security of the word HOME! This is a poem of many answers but still the big question looms, WHAT IS THE WORLD? (I remember an art critic who said Picasso's endless creativity and huge production of paintings came from his love of the WORLD and embrace of it all, good and bad)

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