Celestial Chaos Poem by Laura arwen

Celestial Chaos

Rating: 3.5


My chaos is
very catastrophic and
terrible
I need to
be focused on
decrease my chaos
I'm very good
at accumulating things
but very slow
to fix them
It's easy to
create chaos and
difficult to create
order
I hate chaos
but I can't
control it
Chaos is not
healthy
It is dangerous
for the mind
I think having
too much is
maddening and traumatic
I don't need
chaos and I
don't control it
Lately for me
chaos is really
intolerable
It is powerful
and destructive
I am suffocated
by chaos and
quantity
I'm obsessed to
eliminate the chaos
from my life
The worst chaos
is in the
mind
I want overcome
my chaos
I want fight
the chaos
It can be
a defense from
people and the
reality

Saturday, May 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: chaos
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 05 September 2020

A chaotic mind well represented in the poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 August 2020

Chaos both mentally and in the home due to hoarding and mess can all be very frustrating and and challenging to clear. Kudos for a two way awesome poem wow! ! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history.

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 July 2020

Living with chaos is really painful. But you can't avoid chaos always. You have to learn to manage it and get peace. 'The worst chaos is in the mind I want overcome my chaos I want fight the chaos It can be a defense from people and the reality..' is very nice. Loved the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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