There are some women made of silk
But with steel frameworks deep inside them.
I know such women and I think
That they're both wonderful and shameful.
The wonder is that they are brave
And their hearts are kind and pure,
And they are full of life and faith,
They can support and save, and cure.
They are unable to betray.
They are all proud, strict, but gentle.
The shame is that they quickly fade
And burn themselves down right to ashes.
19/07/2018
And their hearts are kind and pure, And they are full of life and faith, They can support and save, and cure....you are playing with contrasts in this poem . this is a very effective technique in poems. thinking of women and their weaknesses and strengths. all in the same person. very fine poem. tony
Russian women DEVYUSKAS I HAVE KNOWN were more steel than men and you know khoroshaw YA ZNAYU RUSKEEE NEMNOGO LITTLE Have you read my two poems MOMS SMILES AND MOTHERS DAY CAN YOU TRANSLATE ITO RUSSIAN REQUESTS POET ME POET TODAY SPACIBA
The wonder is that they are brave And their hearts are kind and pure, And they are full of life and faith, They can support and save, and cure.......so touching and true. Some women have possessed these qualities. It is really a beautiful poem on womanhood nicely executed.10
Fantastic poem.It handles its theme in an extraordinary manner! More than 10!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A wonderfully penned write. So insightful. ++10