Friday, March 16, 2012

There's A Tiny Brook Of Mind / Postoji Sicusni Potok Uma Comments

Rating: 5.0

mistaken for a huge stream of consciousness
it water falls within a foam of a complex concept
sells on a watchability scale
dressed in a 'theoria'
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Miroslava Odalovic
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Patti Masterman 12 April 2012

I noticed Chevy had commented on this..I think he has all four of his 'doors' fully operational- because this poem is a class act..you will always be one of my favorite poets, on this site and elsewhere.

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Rudeyard Kipling 16 March 2012

I like this....mostly because I hear the tiny brook babbling....and the fall clamoring to the rocks below....I got close enough that the spray from it peppered my face..........nice one thanks...tried to vote 10 but it is maybe an 8+ or something..... never know if votes will be taken or not.....

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