There's A Tiny Brook Of Mind / Postoji Sicusni Potok Uma Poem by Miroslava Odalovic
There's A Tiny Brook Of Mind / Postoji Sicusni Potok Uma
mistaken for a huge stream of consciousness
it water falls within a foam of a complex concept
sells on a watchability scale
dressed in a 'theoria'
pogresno shvacen kao tok svijesti
on vodo pada u pjeni kompleks koncepta
prodaje se na skali gledanosti obucen u 'teoriju'
I like this....mostly because I hear the tiny brook babbling....and the fall clamoring to the rocks below....I got close enough that the spray from it peppered my face..........nice one thanks...tried to vote 10 but it is maybe an 8+ or something..... never know if votes will be taken or not.....
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 6:07:26 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I noticed Chevy had commented on this..I think he has all four of his 'doors' fully operational- because this poem is a class act..you will always be one of my favorite poets, on this site and elsewhere.