There's No Rhythm In This Song Comments

I like this poem Asif. It tells a whole story about the poet's life on his own. Difficult to observe oneself under trying circumstances but you have succeeded here. I also like the poem for its directness and simplicity.

Kevin comment is a true reality written on this poem, it really nice, sweet and again a shade of dark...nice write Asif, keep writing! _Unwritten Soul

Hasn't everyone felt like this at some stage in their life? I like this poem because it is humorous but serious as well. Nice one Asif.