There Was Silence Poem by A. E Loewer

There Was Silence

Rating: 3.5


There was silence
in my heart
And for a moment

It did not restart

that moment




Was eternity,
not real
And for that moment
I wished not to feel

Though time moved forward
There I stayed
In that moment


Life delayed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Buford 20 October 2009

AE, eternity and time are two ideas you use together. There isn't 'time' in eternity. Forever conveys the idea of time. Yes, it is real(eternity) -you asked.

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Romeo Della Valle 19 October 2009

Brief poem, nevertheless, it said it all, well penned, you successfully got your message across, you got my vote, hope you visit my page, keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo, you got my vote....

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