Sometimes I Feel Poem by A. E Loewer

Sometimes I Feel

Rating: 2.8


sometimes I feel
as though I don't feel at all

I can't reach my thoughts
unless I'm willing to fall

and that leap is not always one
that I'm ready to take

sometimes to feel nothing
is better than to break

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mal Sharp 02 November 2009

I like this poem and can relate to it well. I also think it's beautiful in its simplicity. Thank you.

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Mark Buford 20 October 2009

tell the actual source of your sadness in a more detailed poem. Sound very depressed. The sun shines :) The moon beams :) breathe their beauty in :)

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