Monday, March 14, 2005

There Were No Bells Comments

Rating: 2.8

She said there were no bells,
only her clam hands
and fretful feet rattled in the eve.
The sirens would not go off
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Nadia Brown
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Bri Edwards 23 November 2017

in the pint of her belly........... pit? i really don't understand this poem. bri ;)

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Max Reif 21 July 2005

poetic language choices! I'd like to read more too. I see you have a website and a book...

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William Mae 15 March 2005

thats a really good poem, I really enjoyed reading it, I hope you post more. your a good writer.

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Albert Oktovianus 14 March 2005

Wow, 'bells'..those are deep and nice metaphor... :)

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 14 March 2005

Nice! Congratulations

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