Liza Sud

Therefore Never Call Me Dear - Poem by Liza Sud

With an interest I’ll pay you back.
Therefore never call me dear.
Or I will call you my beloved
Under October night star!

You have very beautiful breast
in the black-and-white striped sweater.
In full moon it’s - mercury,
But no one wipes away my tears.

I do not forgive tenderness –.
And I see no excuse for weasel.
I’ll imprison you by myself,
after just having raped you, dear!

Of course sodomy is a sin.
But at last I will spit on it.
As for dears – you capture them
And kiss them with a savageness.

Topic(s) of this poem: dear

Comments about Therefore Never Call Me Dear by Liza Sud

  • Daniel Brick (10/28/2015 10:46:00 AM)

    YOU KISS THEM WITH SAVAGENESS - is that an image of rape? or is it an image of desperation? The language of this poem is really extreme but I can't understand what motivates it. Is the one speaking male or female? What provokes the rough language? I sense the speaker has been deeply hurt by another person in the past and is extremely fearful and angry in the present.Is that what the poem says? (Report) Reply

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  • Saheb Mohapatra (10/28/2015 8:14:00 AM)

    very very intense thoughts........i can behold the fountain of lust rushing out from pure frustration...........but this way of love is surely a sin........perhaps this is not love..........i agree with you...............................very nice poem..........thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kinyua Karanja (10/28/2015 7:21:00 AM)

    Great I could see the whole scenerio; the aggressive and haunting tone to that innocent heart and ears that has no power to defend herself from this- that could harm that harmless creature. great. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 28, 2015

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