These Lands Poem by Brigitte De Nuit

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Brigitte De Nuit

Brigitte De Nuit

Glendale, Arizona, United States of America

These Lands

Rating: 5.0


I walk into this land
This fantasy land
And everything is a dream
For this moment
This beautiful moment
I can see the stars, their gleam

And in this land,
This storybook land
Wishes come true every day
For a moment
A wonderful moment
I know I'm here to stay

While I'm in this land
This adventure land
The thrill never seems to fade
Because in this moment
This glorious moment
Everything is perfectly made

Still in this land
This frontier land
I'm wishing I could never leave
Because this moment
This magical moment
Led me to believe

Leaving this land
This tomorrow land
The end has finally arose
This moment
This awe-inspiring moment
Has finally come to a close  

 

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 25 December 2011

Wow, really an amazing poem! ! ! Top marks! !

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 May 2011

Awesome work. Great sentiments with nice style. Great write indeed. I rate it 10. TFS. Please read and rate my poem 'A daring hope' on page 1.

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Brigitte De Nuit

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