These Starlit Secrets: (July 27th,2020) Poem by DM W

These Starlit Secrets: (July 27th,2020)

Rating: ★5.0


These starlit secrets
Travel on the summer wind,
At late evening time.
They move through the air,
Like comets with brilliant tails.
They enchant our consciousness
In myriad ways.
They permeate our dreaming

Wednesday, September 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: summer,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 12 September 2020

And I hope I spelled grammatical right.

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Shaun Cronick 12 September 2020

A worthy poem that is deserving of another worthy reread and worthy full score as well. And Dominic there are so called people/poets/life's idiots on here who couldn't find their grammatical a r s e in the grammatical dark.

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Shaun Cronick 02 September 2020

Dominic nicely imagined and very well written poem delving into one's consciousness. A true breath of fresh air poem to inhale. A full score and many thanks. Take care and I wish you well.

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