These Stars Poem by Priyanka Shetty

These Stars

Rating: 5.0


These were the same stars that were smilng,
when we were so in love.
These were the same stars,
that made my nights more romantic.
These were the same stars that supported me,
that you were true...
these were the same stars that told me,
we'll get through...

These are still the same stars,
they are still smiling,
seeing you've found another love...
I feel a pinch in their smile,
i've lost myself in between somehow,
though i'd lost you and love for long...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gone with the wind 24 July 2008

This was so good...these very stars..yeah they only tell us we are in love and then they only stare silently, murderously towards us when everything's over...I could put myself there...but no worries these very stars will rise up again: -) Take care Love Gul

0 0 Reply
Rani Turton 12 April 2008

And these same stars will be observing you when you find happiness again.

0 0 Reply
Kesav Easwaran 10 April 2008

the same stars will extend to you their full support... he will come back to you again, i have no doubt! good write, priyanka

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success