Sunday, July 5, 2015

These Thoughts Of Mine Comments

Rating: 4.8

I thought it was a day of celebration,
but it turned a day of vibration.
I thought it would be jingle bells,
but it turned to be funeral bells.
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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry depicting conflicting emotions and thoughts on Christmas day, a day of celebration which is also a day of mourning as the subject's mother took a flight into eternity. It's a nice poem with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Anton Asukile 06 July 2015

Thanks Chinedu Dike

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Ramesh Rai 05 July 2015

The dramatic monologue is very refined but nostalgic. Thanks for sharing.

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Anton Asukile

Anton Asukile

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