kiara o'connell

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*****these Walls****** - Poem by kiara o'connell

i have to put on a smile for a while
i have to pretend that everythings alright
but these walls are closing in and there getting closer every night
i have to stay away from my fears
i have to hide away my tears
but this pain is getting worse, every single day and every single year
i have to pretend im having a good day
i have to act like everythings ok
but im getting unfairly treated, but im to scared to have my say
i have to listen to them lying
i have to comfort them when there crying
but there never there for me even if my happiness is dieing
i have to look and act smart
but if i wear to much make up im a tart
and everytime i get put down i slowly start to fall apart
i have to bow down to you
i have to do everything you want me to do
but im felling so down and you wouldnt have a clue
i have to be silent when you bagg me out to your friends
and if i back chat to you im at my end
but my self esteem is going down will it ever rise again
i want to live life and be me
i dont want to have to force a smile and i want to be happy
but these walls have closed in on me will the ever let me free


Comments about *****these Walls****** by kiara o'connell

  • (8/5/2008 8:37:00 PM)

    hey babe

    this poem let me kno how u r feeling

    love you so very very much

    xoxox
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  • (11/29/2006 5:21:00 PM)

    You are a wonderful person, Im sure, though again I dont know u

    Roger
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  • (10/25/2006 4:07:00 AM)

    have to do everything you want me to do
    but im felling so down and you wouldnt have a clue
    i have to be silent when you bagg me out to your friends
    and if i back chat to you im at my end
    but my self esteem is going down will it ever rise again
    i want to live life and be me
    i dont want to have to force a smile and i want to be happy
    but

    you made a loving and emotional self pigeon like poem...in its wide white wings makes us a think of drift...
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  • (10/11/2006 8:56:00 PM)

    Intense emotion traped feeling like a let me out type of vibe. Great write.
    Lylyanna
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, October 15, 2010


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