Thursday, September 8, 2011

They'Ll Leave Us Crying Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world is dimensional and nothing sees through it;
The walls too opaque, and then time runs away,
Off over the edges and pools there at midnight,
The hour always late or else way much too late.
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Patti Masterman
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Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

we're just like the rest, Dress us in leather or mohair or satin; Thought provoking and inspirational.Well articulated.

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Jim Troy 10 September 2011

A life cycle on this planet is not easy to go through and the pains certainly are severe at the very least most of the time. Oddly I take comfort in a verse part which I Quote: 'There is nothing new under the sun' for it is done over and over again I would gather. And your wonderful poem generously brings into present time how there is no difference, we are all ordinary people. And I beleive that in itself speaks volumes about how special we all are...You are very special to bring it to our attention..............Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 09 September 2011

well written, and heavy with mortality!

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Smoky Hoss 08 September 2011

Such depth of real life in this one, very well written.

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