They Watched The Dawn. Poem by Tom Allport

They Watched The Dawn.

Rating: 5.0


Snow flakes gently floated down
Covering the pock marked
Trench dug ground
With a soft velvety white
They stood waiting
For the whistle to blow
On that early winter morn
All of them
Not wanting to fall
Pal by Pal
They watched the dawn
Their tired bodies and souls
All thinking of 'ome
Trapped in a foreign land
With no ticket out
'Til they hear that sound
Then it's up and out
Into dead man's land
A hellish man-made place
With shells and wiz bangs
Raining down and the
Hissing hissing gas sounds
No time for mad cap hats
Rat a tat tat the
Machine guns sing leaving
Death and carnage
For the Reaper's call
With torrents of tears
As many thousands fall
Leaving their history
In the soft
Blood stained snow
In the theatre of war.

Monday, July 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: warfare
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 20 August 2018

It is unfortunate that man remains man's greatest foe.! How many innocents are killed through rivalry of one sort or the other. It is always a night mare for people to go back to war torn areas where missiles fly and cannons roar! A frightening picture of the brutality of war! A 10

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Lodigiana Poetess 17 July 2018

A poignant reminder of the reality of war- stripped of theatre and facing the cold hard truth of battle. So many young men..lost.A timely reminder as we approach the Centenary of the end of the Great War.. Well constructed and thoughtfully composed+++10. Lodigiana

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