Think About Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Think About

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Think about nothing
Life has for you something
Remembered any one that gives you peace
Two time square meals and life at ease

You have only one goal
Life to be made as simple as possible
Invite no trouble and cause to none
You shall be then worthy human

Even if you think seriously
That may go on consciously
No purpose may be served
As thought is not deserved

We have not enough of time
To think for nothing sometimes
Why at all you should think?
If that makes you to sink

Think of only thing
If that has got relevance or something
It may then give you some room
The garden may come up to blossom

We shall take fresh air
And act very much fair
We shall mix with right people
Dream about land cause no trouble

If my wish can come true
Then rest all of time may be through
As time may then be utilized
If not all but self can be obliged

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Connor Smith18 minutes ago There's no real thing in particular about this poem that is wrong per say, but at some points if feels to me like you were forcing the rhyme. It could also be your usage of eye rhymes, I'm not a huge fan of them but to each his own.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Nice Cathy Pittillo2 minutes ago Great read.. keep writing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2012

Think about nothing Life has for you something

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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