poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Thinking Irrelevent

I sit under tree and think in isolation,
unable to perform or offer consolation,
does this matter? or merely a question,
is it absured thinking without any relation?

I reel under anger and burn with rage,
soul so helpless as lion feels in cage,
As we see fire weapons only in page,
feelings may run high but can't manage,

I want to clean up, throw or destroy,
All evils, dirts and only pure thoughts employ.
Not huge army or battalion for purpose deploy,
Put brave front, dashing thoughts and no decoy,

I see urgent need to rise in arm,
Befitting reply when done some harm,
Tit for tat when deceived or no response warm,
Tactfully hide emotions with beautiful charm,

I may be in readiness and draw weapon,
Keep it ready with edge so sharpened,
Use it rarly when crisis deepen,
avoid conflict and dialogues open,

If sword is to be drawn,
then it must seek blood,
For noble caue and not for selfish end,
sacrifice message to be understood and sent

When country is reeling under heavy flood,
Boats are to be pressed in service for food, ,
I think no more and jump to serve for good,
Improve the situation and bring it out of wood

Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 30, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 6, 2009

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  • K.v. Subbarao (10/10/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    I sit under tree and think in isolation,
    unable to perform or offer consolation,
    does this matter? or merely a question,

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  • Sulochna Pandit (10/9/2009 7:26:00 AM)

    sit under tree and think in isolation,
    unable to perform or offer consolation,
    does this matter? or merely a question,

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  • Raju Rajput (10/9/2009 6:03:00 AM)

    I sit under tree and think in isolation,
    unable to perform or offer consolation,
    does this matter? or merely a question

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  • Maulin Shah (10/7/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    want to clean up, throw or destroy,
    All evils, dirts and only pure thoughts employ.
    Not huge army or battalion for purpose deploy,

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  • Shilpa Maheswari (10/7/2009 8:56:00 PM)

    I sit under tree and think in isolation,
    unable to perform or offer consolation,
    does this matter? or merely a question,
    is it absured thinking without any relation

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  • Kamli Kamal (10/7/2009 8:37:00 PM)

    want to clean up, throw or destroy,
    All evils, dirts and only pure thoughts employ.
    Not huge army or battalion for purpose deploy

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  • Kashi Paul (10/6/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    I sit under tree and think in isolation,
    unable to perform or offer consolation,
    does this matter? or merely a question

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  • Umesh Lalvani (10/6/2009 9:47:00 PM)

    If sword is to be drawn,
    then must seek blood,

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  • Pami Panchal (10/6/2009 9:17:00 PM)

    When country reeling under heavy flood,
    Boats to be pressed in service for food, ,

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  • Suresh Vakil (10/2/2009 7:53:00 AM)

    sit under tree and think in isolation,
    unable to perform so offer consolation,

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  • Chaul Vania (8/30/2009 9:49:00 PM)

    I sit under tree and think in isolation,
    unable to perform so offer consolation,
    does this matter? or mere a question, ..........10
    is

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  • Argum Sheth (8/19/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    think positive always/////10

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  • Durga Sethani (8/19/2009 7:09:00 AM)

    u should thin relevent only....10

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  • Jayant Manik (8/14/2009 8:45:00 AM)

    avoid thinking it unnecessarily....10

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  • Kant Shri (8/14/2009 8:35:00 AM)

    avoid thinking over it agn n agn...10

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  • Ritul Soni (8/1/2009 9:24:00 PM)

    would you like to add a comment?
    ' Think in isolation '
    I sit under tree and think in isolation.......u should not, , ,10

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  • Ratna Patel (8/1/2009 11:21:00 AM)

    would you like to add a comment?
    ' Think in isolation '
    should avoid irrelevent thinking...10

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  • Ketan Rajgor (8/1/2009 12:50:00 AM)

    feelings run high but can't manage,

    I want to clean up and destroy,
    no use to think irrelevent...10

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  • Pittle Shaileja (7/28/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    I sit under tree and think in isolation,
    unable to perform so offer consolation,
    does this matter? or mere a question,
    is absured thinking without any relation?
    useless thinking in isolation...10

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  • Trevor William (7/27/2009 9:12:00 PM)

    World will cease to exist and face extinction,
    Not to differentiate and make the distinction...u think irrelevent when alone....10

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