Tuesday, February 9, 2016

Third Letter From Zeno Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her laughter was a starburst,
a 4th of July explosion
in his heart.
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COMMENTS
Seamus O Brian 04 October 2016

This is a deep pool of beautiful wisdom. I feel like i have stumbled upon a masterpiece in an old barn. Every stanza is so rich in meaning and depth. I will add it to my Poem List and read it frequently. Thank you for this beautiful piece.

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Barry Middleton 04 October 2016

Thanks Neal. I am so glad you found this poem. As you can tell, I put a lot of effort into it.

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