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The wind blew through the trees like laughter come un-done,
You picked me up and brought me out into the blazing sun.
I felt the heat and began to dance to express that I felt free,
You followed me and kept the beat with your hands and then joined me.
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Oh my goodness! ! You actually might me right when you said that it was your latest and greatest. It is really close to 'Love Songs'. Man alive, i wouldnt want the dance to end either.
A dance can definately do that...Grooving to the beat w/ some hot new find.....sometimes nothing is better! Great Job Allison, I like your style.
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3/17/2026 6:53:09 AM # 1.0.0
I gave this a 9 because it was a focused rhyming piece that was easy to read and understand. I don't read many pieces that contain all these elements. GW62