This Life Is Mine Comments

There's not much I can say about this wonderful poem. This is a masterpiece. Keep on writing.

This is so beautifully expressed.

that poem is exactly me

As I see it , all three poems are sending the same basic message. I don't often see this, but I certainly hope you wrote this one last. That's because it's the best by far. Your meaning in this one had no hurdles for the reader to climb over. That's a good lesson to learn. It appears you have learned it if, as I said, this one was written last. This one is very good. I really liked it. Good luck! GW62