This Means Goodbye.Finally Poem by AshleyMarie Rippey

This Means Goodbye.Finally

Rating: 5.0


it's done...
complete...
ready for digestion...
introspection...
a year of my life encapsulated through words and sounds...
expressed the only way i've ever known...

all the delicate pieces have slowly fallen into their respective places...
abstract shards coming realized in the form of tone...
the desolation fully emphasizesthe lucid climate...
liberation is finally in the atmosphere
the gradual plummet to the bottom propses a brand new hope...
a glimpse of something more...
a sign of a better future...

the water has flooded...
it took disgust for revolution...
only to fade into noise...
every detail still manages to count...
every moment remains a fleeting memory...

retinas bleeding truth...
rays still burn the lies...
false ambitions reveal their true colors...
leaving nothing to be lost...

this marks an end to a much needed beginning...
only growth and evolution lie ahead...
here comes the inevitable change...
be prepared.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Layney Lou 20 February 2008

THIS IS REALLY GOOD! ! I LOVE IT.. I LOVE THE WAY IT WAS WRITTEN AND THE VOCABULARY.. ITS AN AWESOME POEM.. I HOPE TO READ SOME NEW ONES SOON! ! ~ LAYNEY <3 ~

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