Friday, March 23, 2018

This Night I Stay Awake Comments

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This night I stay awake;
I fear to drown in a dreamless slumber.
I ache to hand you my destruction.
My thoughts torment, monsters in my head.
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Lovely Mitra
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Very expressive eloquent images, yet a poem marked by its brevity. Bursting on the face of the reader. Marvellous.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 March 2018

Pain of inability to face the subconscious so well described. Nice poem Mitra, Keep it up.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 March 2018

ache to hand you my destruction. My thoughts torment, monsters in my head. very expressive of your pain and thoughts of sorrow and helplessness and ur desire to stay awake....... very nice - tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 March 2018

Write comment. A beautiful poem, Mitra. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Amrapali Mitra 23 March 2018

Thank you!

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