lil island Gal

Rookie (1989 / khi)

Though I Broke My Promise - Poem by lil island Gal

Though I broke my promise and your trust,
My love for you remains as strong as ever.
I know it must mean little to swear never
Again to break my word, and yet I must.
What else can I do? Your fury's just,
But all my world will darken if you sever
My heart from yours. Please wait, and I'll endeavor
To blow new life into this mound of dust.
All that you require of me I'll do
And more, if what you ask leaves room for more.
Thus time will heal this wound and leave no scar.
Since I now know the pain of losing you,
I'll be yours more than I could before,
And you will see what my true feelings are.

Comments about Though I Broke My Promise by lil island Gal

  • (1/4/2009 6:31:00 AM)

    great writing, not bad anyway. (Report) Reply

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  • Sadiqullah Khan (12/4/2008 4:43:00 AM)

    Never take to proof the false promises of the beloved
    The lies she swears upon shall loose its beauty
    the illusion of love i carry in my head
    beyond reality o heart dont take me away
    in soft fantasy of the night and your arms
    when i woke like a child did i cry
    the emptiness of the room where only your aroma
    and perfumes of the bath from your steaming body
    the promises of the last night dont take to your heart
    alas but if had taken her necklace in my palm
    not for me but for the necklace may
    she return to me to fullfill her promise
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  • (7/19/2008 2:11:00 PM)

    nice write! though a suggestion: come out of rhyming by force, it reduces the originality and the expression.
    idea was great!
    nice write after all!
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  • Dipika P (4/14/2008 2:25:00 AM)

    nice one..liked readin it... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 14, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, December 20, 2008

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